02-27 Pain!  It Hurts!
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02-27 Pain! It Hurts!

Tue, 23rd Jul, 2019

BMR on Tue, 23rd Jul, 2019

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The first panel isn't quite how I originally envisioned it. Originally, neither of the children were in frame, and the shot was intended to be just an aerial view of the house, with the roof blocking off any sight of the two. The text balloons would have been the only indication that they were there. I found though, that this didn't have quite the same impact, so I went ahead an included a few images of them running around the yard.

Also, I'm not entirely sure how well the color shift portrays the passage of time to dusk. I like to think that it works well enough, but knowing me, I'm probably going to admit to myself sooner or later that I'm not satisfied with it, and I'll try to figure out a better way of doing it.

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