02-30 Ashface
  • first
  • last

02-30 Ashface

Fri, 26th Jul, 2019

BMR on Fri, 26th Jul, 2019

[edit] [delete]

view BMR's profile
And after nearly two chapters of the "Daughter", we finally get to meet "Ashface".

Also, is his text a bit too hard to read? I want it to come off that his voice is definitely different from others, kind of like with the Master. Specifically, I want it to look like his voice is rather hoarse and scratchy. I'm not 100% on the font used though, as it might be a bit too much.


>user comments

...(RockB) on Sun, 28th Jul, 2019

[edit] [delete] [reply]

view ...(RockB)'s profile
A bit hard, yes. But it's not unreadable. It seems that Ashfaces font is smaller so he seems to speak in a rather low voice, noticeably lower than the others. If that's not intended and if I might suggest something, it'd be: Making the font bigger, so that the "o"s are the same size as Anna's "o"s. The coloring and the special font would make his voice still less clear than the others.

BMR on Sun, 28th Jul, 2019

[edit] [delete] [reply]

view BMR's profile
Actually, that's pretty close to how I wanted it to come off. Noticeably lower than the others, as you said. Like, as if his throat were injured at some point, making talking quite the task, so his voice is lower and harsher than most. As well as being softer, and perhaps harder to hear.

...(RockB) on Sun, 28th Jul, 2019

[edit] [delete] [reply]

view ...(RockB)'s profile
Then, 100% success!

I was thinking about "softer", too, and wasn't sure about it because a raspy voice IMHO sounds harsher but if a softer voice was what you intended: 100% success!

BMR on Sun, 28th Jul, 2019

[edit] [delete] [reply]

view BMR's profile
Awesomeness, thanks!

Check out other great comics!