02-31 She Did Tell Him So
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02-31 She Did Tell Him So

Mon, 29th Jul, 2019

BMR on Mon, 29th Jul, 2019

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Definitely one of the more text-heavy pages I've got. By the time Chapter 03 rolls around, I should probably edit things to have less text. I guess that's a problem of mine, I love writing dialogue and getting into character's heads. Fun stuff.


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Haegan2005 on Mon, 29th Jul, 2019

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There are two ways to tell a story. Visually and verbally. A comic simply mixes these together to one extend or another.

I have no issues with the amount of text on this page as it is well placed and does not block character expressions nor body language.

pkrankow on Mon, 29th Jul, 2019

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Reads well. Dialog is important and tends to break action. This is good.

...(RockB) on Mon, 29th Jul, 2019

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Yeah, it's fine.

And the last panel made me smile. It's an extremely compelling argument :)

BMR on Tue, 30th Jul, 2019

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Awesome, thanks for the feedback, guys :)

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